Dawit is filling out a job application that includes the following instructions: Write a brief personal statement, which must contain...
GMAT Multi Source Reasoning : (MSR) Questions
Dawit is filling out a job application that includes the following instructions:
Write a brief personal statement, which must contain the following:
- A description of your career goals
- An explanation of why you are interested in this job
- A description of any personal qualities or experiences that make you a desirable candidate
Do not repeat information provided in your résumé.
For each of the three lettered requirements in the Instructions tab, select Yes if Sentence 2 of Dawit's draft of his personal statement clearly helps the draft satisfy that requirement. Otherwise, select No.
OWNING THE DATASET
Understanding Source A: Text Source - Job Application Instructions
Information from Dataset | Analysis |
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"Write a brief personal statement, which must contain the following: A. A description of your career goals B. An explanation of why you are interested in this job C. A description of any personal qualities or experiences that make you a desirable candidate" |
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"Do not repeat information provided in your résumé" |
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Summary: The instructions require a brief personal statement with three mandatory components (career goals, interest in job, and personal qualities/experiences) while avoiding any repetition of résumé information.
Understanding Source B: Text Source - Dawit's Draft Personal Statement
Information from Dataset | Analysis |
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"(1) My ten years of experience in administrative services make me well suited for this job." |
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"(2) I am conscientious, organized, and highly motivated." |
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"(3) The ability to work with managers to improve efficiency is highly important, and I have demonstrated this skill throughout my work life." |
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"(4) My goal is to provide the best possible service to your company." |
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"(5) I hope to perform well enough to be promoted into middle management." |
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Summary: Dawit's five-sentence draft attempts to address all three required elements from the instructions, but sentence 1 might violate the no-résumé-repetition rule, and the draft uses generic language that may need more specificity.
Understanding Source C: Table - Friends' Feedback on Draft
- Table Analysis:
- The table shows three friends (Beza, Kayla, Solomon) giving feedback on each of Dawit's five sentences
- Key patterns observed: Sentence 4 receives criticism from all three friends, while other sentences get mixed feedback
- Inference: The lack of consensus on most sentences suggests the draft has both strengths and weaknesses
- Linkage to Source A: Solomon specifically identifies that Sentence 1 violates the "don't repeat résumé information" instruction
- Linkage to Source B: The friends' feedback targets specific issues in each sentence, with particular focus on vagueness and word repetition
Sentence Feedback | Analysis |
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Sentence 1: Beza: "OK"; Kayla: "Delete this sentence"; Solomon: "Don't repeat information from your résumé" |
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Sentence 2: Beza: "Be more specific"; Kayla: "Move it to the end of the paragraph"; Solomon: "Good" |
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Sentence 3: Beza: "Don't use the same adverb twice so close together"; Kayla: "OK"; Solomon: "Delete 'highly'" |
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Sentence 4: Beza: "Sounds like an exaggeration"; Kayla: "Be more specific"; Solomon: "Too vague" |
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Sentence 5: Beza: "OK"; Kayla: "Good"; Solomon: "Combine with sentence 4" |
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Summary: The friends' feedback reveals that Dawit's draft has specific problems: sentence 1 repeats résumé information (violating instructions), sentence 4 is unanimously criticized as vague/exaggerated, and there's inconsistent use of the word "highly" that needs fixing.
Overall Summary
- Dawit's draft attempts to include all three required elements (career goals, interest in job, and qualities/experiences) but has several key issues
- The most critical problems are: (1) Sentence 1 violates the instruction not to repeat résumé information, and (2) Sentence 4, which states a career goal, is too vague and sounds exaggerated according to all reviewers
- The friends also want more specificity throughout the draft, which creates tension with the instruction to keep it "brief"
- To improve, Dawit should delete or replace sentence 1, make his goal statement in sentence 4 more specific and realistic, and fix the repeated use of "highly" in sentence 3
Question Analysis
The question asks whether the sentence "I am conscientious, organized, and highly motivated" helps meet each of the three required elements: A (career goals), B (job interest), and C (personal qualities). This requires evaluating Sentence 2 specifically to determine if it clearly helps satisfy each requirement, with a Yes or No answer needed for each requirement.
Key Constraints:
- Must evaluate Sentence 2 specifically
- Must determine if it clearly helps satisfy each requirement
- Must answer Yes or No for each requirement
Answer Type Needed: Direct verification against requirements
Connecting to Our Analysis
The analysis shows Source A lists three requirements, Source B contains Sentence 2 describing personal qualities, and Source C shows reviewer reactions to this sentence. The analysis contains all needed information to answer the question directly.
Extracting Relevant Findings
We are evaluating whether Sentence 2 "I am conscientious, organized, and highly motivated" satisfies each requirement. The sentence content lists three personal qualities, leading to the hypothesis that this sentence should satisfy Requirement C but not A or B.
Individual Statement/Option Evaluations
Requirement A Evaluation
Requirement: Career goals description
- The sentence describes personal qualities rather than career goals
- Career goals appear in Sentences 4-5, but no career goals content is present in Sentence 2
- No connection between the listed qualities and specific career objectives
- Conclusion: Does not satisfy Requirement A
Requirement B Evaluation
Requirement: Explanation of job interest
- The sentence lists personal qualities without any connection to job interest
- No explanation of why the person is interested in the position
- No job interest content is present in the sentence
- Conclusion: Does not satisfy Requirement B
Requirement C Evaluation
Requirement: Personal qualities or experiences
- The sentence directly lists three personal qualities: conscientious, organized, and highly motivated
- This directly matches the requirement for personal qualities
- Content type aligns perfectly with what Requirement C requests
- Conclusion: Clearly satisfies Requirement C
Systematic Checking
Cross-verification against all sources reveals:
- Instructions explicitly require personal qualities or experiences
- Sentence 2 provides exactly that: personal qualities
- Reviewers recognized these as qualities despite mixed reactions
- The sentence type matches only one requirement: C
Final Answer
- Requirement A: No
- Requirement B: No
- Requirement C: Yes
Requirement A
Requirement B
Requirement C